After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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Peter, I am writing to express my gratitude for enabling me to live a new life after the unfortunate accident I met with earlier. A year before, when I was on my way to work, I got hit by a car. Due to the force at which I got hurt, I got unconscious. When I woke up in the hospital, I came to know you have managed to do all the necessary things for saving my life. If you would not have helped me in

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a condition, I would not be fortunate enough to live a healthy life today. Your good deeds have saved me, and for which I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart. To convey my obliged wishes, I request you kindly visit my home on the occasion of our house warming ceremony. My family is waiting to meet you, as

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day would not be so auspicious for me and my family

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if you would not have saved me before from

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accident. Yours Sincerely. Komal Seeta

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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