i. #Environment - Nowdays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? (IELTS 5, GT)

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Recent years have seen plentiful garbage production in daily lives, which is happening because of numerous reasons. The authorities can decrease the rubbish volume by implying: reduce, recycle and reuse formula. Notwithstanding,

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disclosure will explore the reasons behind the extra products, and will mention the steps that should taken by a government as well as a community. Apparently, many advocates postulate that people have been attracted towards the materialistic life, which lead more and more manufacturers of every kind of things

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as: clothes, equipment, electrical gadgets and vehicles.

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, it is being said that the discard method of some equipments charge a tremendous amount of money to government, and

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products are not bio-degradable, which can pollute to the environment.

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, where the needs of necessity things are lesser, but the fashion industries are producing in a gigantic load can lead to excessive storage of products, which are not only the disastrous things, but

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occupy extra space and money. To exemplify, according to one survey published by the New York Times, 60% products are extravagant compared to the necessity of people around the world.

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, still the situation in our hands, if all societies want a beautiful and the cleanest world back. The possible proactive steps can taken by the governments in many forms.

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, having encouraged the industries and companies to reduce the amount of production by applying heavy duty charges and taxes.

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, they can motivate all persons to recycle few products

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as: cardboard, steel containers, glasses and plastics.

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, the use of products again and again can

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bring major changes to the rubbish merchandise, and people can be advised by an advertisement or campaign by famous celebrities. To conclude, having explored both standpoints, I reiterate that the reasons of rubbish manufacture is materialistic life and craze around the world;

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, the solution can be brought by an authority is the awareness to the public and charging high costs to

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companies.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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i. #Environment - Nowdays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? (IELTS 5, GT)

Your opinion

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to a future career; others think the true function of a university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion of the main function of university?