The best recommendation from psychologists to overcome tension is stay calm without doing anything during the day.

Although

many would not agree to stay calm, I completely agree that individuals should stay calm if they are tensed.

this

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This

essay will discuss the importance of staying calmer rather than doing something. Nowadays everyone is leading a machine life due to a fast moving lifestyle. In

this

scenario, individuals have more chances of leading the stressful life. In order to reduce weight

one

should look for recommendations from doctors and follow them strictly to reduce tension.

For instance

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people working in information technology definitely have a

stress

because they are not moving around and looking

after

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over

the computer screen for a long time and no physical activities,

thus

increases in obesity and leads to high pressure, so it is best to stay calm as suggested by a psychologist. Despite the force of above argument,

one

should take care of themselves after crossing

age

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the age

of 50 by not stressing much and

relaxing always

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always relaxing

one

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One

could stay calm by listening to good songs and by doing some

breatechniquesthing

exercises.

For

instance

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instance, one

one

can practice

pranayama

and simple yoga

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introduces an alternative

simple way to keep calm just close your eyes and sit straight for

sometime

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some time

wherever you are it helps to reduce your

stress

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therefore

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Therefore, one

Therefore one

one

must care of health because nothing is

essential

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more essential

than life. In conclusion,

although

there are several physical exercises to reduce

stress

, it helps for a long run to get immediate relief

one

must keep calm for some time to get rid of

stress

immediately.

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