Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some believed that governments should ban dangerous sports, since these may influence other people and increase more health expenditure of society. While, the others think people have the right to choose for doing any kind of sports. There are many reasons why some people think the sports

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as skiing, sky diving and other forms of dangerous sports should be banned. For starters, doing the these sports may not only hurt own self but influence other people.

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, children whose minds are not mature will learn other people's behaviour and don't know to judge these. They may get hurt due to imitating the dangerous sports.

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, these dangerous sports will increase health expenditure of society. Some may say that the medical resources can be used on someone who really need these, not be used on the people who put themselves in danger just for excitement.

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, the others may say that everyone should be free to choose what kind of sports to do.

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, it is unrealistic to limit the dangerous sport. If a person want to jump into the sea to surfing, it is hard to imagine that how can police do to restrict it all the time. Meanwhile, it is hard to set the standard for defining dangerous sports.

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, there are many people riding bicycles for commuting everyday and it

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cause car accidents usually. Will cycling be counted as a dangerous sport? Most of people don't think so. In conclusion, it seems that ban the dangerous sports may benefit our society,

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, it is unrealistic and people should have the right to choose what kind of sports to do.

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Your opinion

In some societies, more and more people are deciding to live alone. Why do you think this is? Do the advantages of living alone outweigh the disadvantages?

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people assert that it is good for college students to have part-jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?