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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#countries #people #products #world #development
It
can not
can not
cannot
 be denied that people can share the common consumer goods all over the nations nowadays because of the globalization influence. In my point of
view it
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view, it
 can lead to both positive and negative effects. In fact, it is
such
 an advantage for the countries to export their country's products to the other nations
in particular
 for income term. By delivering products to other countries, a nation can rise the volume of the stock exchange which strengthen state's
financial
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finances
. In
example
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the example
, because of the minimalism trend all over the world, Sweden gets a ton of orders through its furniture
brand
 IKEA.
peole
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People
Poole
Peole
 from all over the places want to apply the Sweden balance life through simple and effective furniture that are produced by IKEA. The
second
 positive effect is appreciation for the company or factory which established the products. Purchasing consumer goods means people
attract
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are attracted
 by them and it is a kind of appreciation for the craft-makers or producers that can
leads
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lead
 to a better productivity. When demand
is increasing
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increases
, it gives positive relationship with the production rate.
However
,
this
 trend can be negative because it can lead to consumerism and plagiarism. In a similar case is plagiarism of popular
shoes
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shoes, brand
brand
 'Nike'. Because of the great demand, a number of places produce it with the less quality materials and sell it with the high price. It includes a plagiarism that brings the advantage for the buyers.
On the other hand
, a high
popularity
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popular
brand
is usually have
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has usually had
usually has
 a higher price which can be excessive. But, because of its popularity, the
brand
 can be sold out only for a couple of hours. If it happens in
longer period
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a longer period
 of time, it can
brings
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bring
 to the consumerism behaviour. To sum up, it is a good thing that people from around the world can have similar products, but both positive and negative effects need to be considered.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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