Traditional classrooms in the past held lectures with multiple participants. Now that technology makes it easier and faster for students to access information, the need for traditional classroom discussion is becoming less popular. It’s because the internet is a more effective method than the regular classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What is your personal opinion?

Nowadays, it's uncommon to see classes being conducted through online applications
such
as
zoom or Google classroom
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a zoom or Google classroom
the zoom or Google classroom
. All of
this
is possible due to technological advancement which enable students to obtain information more readily.
Hence
, many people think online teaching is better than traditional classes. In my opinion, I completely disagree with
this
statement because
this
will not provide the same effect as
class room
a room in a school where lessons take place
classroom
teaching.
First
and foremost, the practice of teaching requires full
attention
from the students, which is not possible with
this
type of methodology because, children tend to get distracted very easily.
As a result
, they began to lose
interest what is being
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interest in what is being
taught in
the classes leading to
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classes leading to the
poor results in exams.
For example
, a survey conducted to test the
attention
span of children revealed that, they are likely to show interest only for about initial 15-20 minutes. Which is not a great amount of time to grasp everything
that is
being explained to them.
Secondly
, lack of personal
attention
to each student will cause decrease in productivity from badly performing students. Mostly, students who are brilliant in studies tend to benefit from
such
online classes. And those who require personal
attention
tends to be left out. Face to face interactive session between a teacher and a student provides equal opportunity for every
children
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child
to perform in the same way.
For instance
, a study conducted to
evaluate
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Evaluate
the performance of
school
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the school
a school
schools
Revealed that, a higher pass percentage was seen in institutions that followed
traditional teaching method
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the traditional teaching method
than the ones who supported online methods. In conclusion, conducting classes online is beneficial for
children but
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children, but
that doesn't mean we have to completely remove our traditional teaching method. Because it doesn't provide the any improvements in performance of the students.
Hence
, I don't support
such
a notion.
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