Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both view and What is your opinion?

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Some people hold the view that an individual should accept a
crisis
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like being unhappy with its work or having more debt than income, while others believe that people should work hard and come out of
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crisis
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the crisis
. In my opinion, I completely agree with the latter view. On the one hand, some people accept the fact that they will never get the job that they desire or they will never have sufficient money to spend. The main reason of
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may be related to their upbringing. In some part of society, people are advised, by the older generation, to accept their situation as a part of their
destiny
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which will never change.
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, there is a belief by the older generation, in India, that the
destiny
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of an individual is already planned by the almighty and one has to accept it and survive.
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,
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thought process is imbibed in new generations.
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, I believe that an individual should have a complete control over its
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, and should try its best to overcome any
crisis
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.
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is because people, sometime, may face a challenge in their
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. If they are not trying to improve they will suffer in their
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.
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, Amitabh, a renowned Indian actor, suffered bankruptcy in the early
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of
acting but
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acting, but
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of accepting it as his
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he
choose
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chooses
to fight back and now is the highest paid actor in the Indian cinema.
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shows that people should not accept the temporary
crisis
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as their
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and
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should put some effort to overcome it. In conclusion,
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people are faced with challenges in
life
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like less income or undesirable jobs, they should not simply accept it but should try to overcome the challenges.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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