In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #smoke #places #people

Smoking in public places is not only dangerous for the smokers but

also

for the people in the surrounding. Several countries have taken an initiative to ban smoking in public places.

However

, if anyone wants to

smoke

, he or she should leave the vicinity. I completely agree with the given statement due to several reasons which

refers to the speaker or writer

would substantiate with valid supporting reasons in the ensuring paragraph. It is irrefutable that smoking has many side effects.

First

Suggestion

The first

and the foremost is passive smoking. Smoking is not injurious for one who is smoking, but it

also

has detrimental effects on the other people as well.

For example

, a study conducted by the World Pulmonology society, revealed that 6 out of 10 people who exposed to

smoke

indirectly, develop pulmonary hypertension.

Furthermore

, those individuals who are asthmatic cannot work efficiently if exposed to

smoke

Thus

, it is imperative to allot a separate area for the smokers in order to prevent others.

Secondly

, the probability of suffering from cancer is almost equal is active and passive smokers, because cigarette contains carcinogenic elements.

For example

, According to the recent statistics shared by world oncology society, smoking is the leading cause of lung cancer around the world. One cannot deny the fact that it is not easy for a smoker to stop smoking in a day or two, since it has various withdrawal effects.

Therefore

, proper awareness related to the consequences of smoking should be spread by leading societies to halt

this

major health concern.

Hence

, in order to recapitulate, it can be said that smoking is responsible for serious health issues for smokers and non-smokers as well. It is much important to mark which area is a building is

smoke

free and should nominate a dedicated place for smokers.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

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295 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

secondhand smoke
respiratory problems
cardiovascular disease
clean air
public health
hospital admissions
economic benefits
smoking cessation
cultural shift
healthcare costs
smoke-free laws
enforcement
designated smoking areas
compliance
social attitudes

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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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