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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #scale
Some people believe that environmental problems and
issues
 must be negotiated on an international scale
while
 others oppose and think that it is better to evaluate them nationally.
Although
 it is believed by some that it is better to answer
this
 complication nationwide, I opine that it is far better to involve the developed
countries
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 the issue as most of them have already tackled the issue. The concerned authorities and organizations, who are the councils of environmental
issues
, must take adequate steps and measures to resolve these
issues
 globally rather than domestically. On one hand, certain groups of people believe that environmental
issues
 should be resolved domestically.
For instance
, the country can plan to take a survey of various places of its country which are threat to mass pollution
,
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 and take the right steps to alleviate the problem.
In the
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 international survey conducted by Indonesia
has
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revealed that
countries
 that dealt with environmental
issues
 nationally
has
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 developed immensely as they have
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 prerequisite to tackle the
issues
.
Therefore
, it is recommended that
countries
 take
the
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control of
this
 issue themselves, as
this
 will assist them in improving
this
 skill.
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 to
this
, some believe that all environmental
issues
 must be discussed globally in order to explicitly and critically understand the matter and conciliate with other developed
countries
 to reduce the increasing number of environmental problems.
For example
, it has been seen that if more developed
countries
 conciliate
together with
the
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developing
countries
, the circumstances can change rapidly and phenomenally. The developed
countries
 can even offer funds to non-industrialised
countries
 to reduce
issues
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.
Subsequently
, many experts believe that will aid all the developing and developed
countries
. In conclusion, world pollution and environmental problems have become a worldwide phenomenon and all
the
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countries
 must hold their hands together to undermine the subject from the roots. I believe it will not only eradicate the affair but
also
 help the non-developed
countries
 to mitigate the problem.
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task response
The introduction could be more direct and clear in presenting the writer's opinion.
coherence cohesion
Improve the use of linking words and transitional phrases to enhance coherence and cohesion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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