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You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

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Dear Rahul, Hope you're doing fine after our get-together
last
 week. I'm writing
this
 letter to you because I
accidently
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accidentally
 carried your G-Shock watch
along with
 me. Honestly, I had a wonderful time during our staycation at the Rovena Resort in Umm Al Quwain. Especially, meeting up with everyone after a very long time was so much fun and exciting. We should definitely have
such
 events more often. Unfortunately,
you're
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watch
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 has been lying
with
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 me
after
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 that day. I had actually removed and kept my watch safely in the bag. But the next day,
while
 packing up in a rush I wore the watch lying on the table which was similar to my G-Shock watch. Later, after reaching home I realized it was not mine noticing the strap which was different.
Anyways
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, my brother is planning to fly to India next week for a get-
together with
 his friends in Kerala Vykyam Resorts. I can ask him , to drop by your place and
handover
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 the watch to you in the same condition. Let me know if
this
 works out for you, so I can plan
accordingly
. Sincerely, Vipin Abraham
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single idea per paragraph
Consider breaking up longer paragraphs to ensure a single idea per paragraph, which can enhance readability.
greeting and closing
Your opening and closing are clear and appropriately polite, setting a pleasant tone for the letter.
logical structure
The logical structure of your letter is strong, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion that sequencing well.
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