You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

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Dear Rahul, Hope you're doing fine after our get-together

last

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week. I'm writing

this

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letter to you because I

accidently

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accidentally

carried your G-Shock watch

along with

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me. Honestly, I had a wonderful time during our staycation at the Rovena Resort in Umm Al Quwain. Especially, meeting up with everyone after a very long time was so much fun and exciting. We should definitely have

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events more often. Unfortunately,

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watch

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has been lying

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after

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that day. I had actually removed and kept my watch safely in the bag. But the next day,

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packing up in a rush I wore the watch lying on the table which was similar to my G-Shock watch. Later, after reaching home I realized it was not mine noticing the strap which was different.

Anyways

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, my brother is planning to fly to India next week for a get-

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his friends in Kerala Vykyam Resorts. I can ask him , to drop by your place and

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the watch to you in the same condition. Let me know if

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works out for you, so I can plan

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. Sincerely, Vipin Abraham

keerthy9209Mon Jun 24 2024

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greeting and closing

Your opening and closing are clear and appropriately polite, setting a pleasant tone for the letter.

logical structure

The logical structure of your letter is strong, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion that sequencing well.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents, even after they have completed their education and found a job.

In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?