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The parents and elders believe that the children should spend less time in front of the computer screens as it is harmful to the eyes. To what extent do you agree or disargee?

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In
this
 contemporary era, the world is changing by leaps and bounds. Computers have changed the perception of the entertainment and education. So, parents think that children should spend less
time
 in
front
 of
computer
 screens because it leads problems for human body. I totally agree with the aforesaid statement. It has more cons outweigh pros.
First
 and foremost, Invention of digital media brought many advantages for mankind, but it
also
 brought some major diseases as well. If a person spends a whole day in
front
 of
computer
 screens,
then
 they will behave very violently, because it emits radio waves which is harmful for human skins.
Also
, spending more
time
 in
front
 of
computer
 screens, not only diminished mental health, but it
also
 diminished physical health. The contains show in computers is
also
 not useful for the child at
this
 age.
In addition
 to the above, a child who spends more
time
 with
computer
Suggestion
the computer
computers
 will be addicted to
this
, due to
this
 they cannot concentration in a particular topic for long hours. He or she does not want to play outdoor sports, owing to
this
 their physical development should be isolated.
Moreover
, children do not want socialized and remained homesick. Sometimes, spending more
time
 in
front
 of
computer
 screens is the root cause of eye strain problems like shortsightedness which is very harmful for a child in the small age. To conclude, parents ought to limit their children to use computers for less
time
. They should have to monitor their children while they are using computers, so they should not suffer with
this
 kind of diseases.
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