One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is why in some countries youth have to work harder and rest less because of
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peer pressure. In many countries education systems are highly competitive
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students
have to do their best just to be accepted to university or college. Even though they have more leisure time it always
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to be used to gain knowledge or
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school projects. In my
it is a global problem that, of course, has its solutions.
The main cause of
this
problem is extensive curriculum and examination pressure. In many countries, especially in Asia, it’s
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common issue that
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students
literally feel excessively stressed about national exams after graduation.
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system in Asia is really violent,
for instance
,
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students
think that the exam they pass after graduation can decide their fate,
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is the reason why
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teachers prepare
students
for the exams from an early age.
This
may have a good effect on their future life until they become mentally illness. It is probably the most widely spread situation
people
meet after a big stress attack.
This
also
could lead to increasing suicide rates or might result in unemployment growth.
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bombing,
moreover
I suppose it will not help to solve
this
problem so we can confidently cross off the list.
Firstly
people
may start rallies,
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. Rebellion against Ministers of Education. At least it can give
people
an opportunity to pass exams a bit easier with less anxiety. And
at the end
, maybe, removing all the tests, but it is not sure.
Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to
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conclusion that
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students
to study hard and the pressure that they get have a bad influence on
students
’s minds and lives. So it wouldn’t be surprising to see some
people
being mentally unstable because of
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of studying. It really can become a reflection of their mental state.