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Some people think that government spending on the restoration of old buildings in the cities should be stopped. Instead, they should spend the money for housing and road development. To what extent do you agree?

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I truly agree with
this
 point that the government must spend the money for accommodations and road development. Nowadays, there are many problems
such
 as traffic jams and some accident on the road. The government should be responsible to find the procedure to manage the problems. To renovate old buildings is not as essential as providing some accommodations to poor guys living with no house on the road.
This
 action must be stopped because people usually travel in the lane by transportations
such
 as bus, taxi and motorcycle, So to develop the way of conveying is the most important thing to improve ,
Moreover
,
this
 method is capable of decreasing the traffic jams and it will become more comfortable to travel for tourist looking forward to visiting the tourist attraction. In fact, Both of the two perspectives are worth to do, but the authority should realize about the convenience
first
 and if there are many old structures in the cities it can be renewed again as the authority has time to do.
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