Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

Education has been evolving by leaps and bounds and providing children with new avenues while keeping students updated with the relevant skills and mindset. Many children struggle working their
mathematics
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mathematical
problems and try to grasp some philosophical ideas every day.
Therefore
, a fair amount of people believe, challenging subjects
such
as mathematics and
philosophy
should be an optional choice in school. I do not completely agree with
this
, as these lessons have its values in shaping one’s life and are so much significant in our daily lives. To embark on, there are multiple reasons why these subjects are taught in school for every
child
.
First
of all, mathematics helps and trains to think and solve problems logically and
also
it is
use
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used
in other field of studies. Namely, Pythagoras is used in architect to calculate height of a building or it is widely used in core engineering fields.
Secondly
,
philosophy
teaches students
core values
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the core values
of ethics. An example for
this
, during work life, one is required to make business decisions where conscience is involved.
However
, these subjects are difficult
to some of students
Suggestion
for some students
for some of students
, as we know every
child
is not
borne
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born
with intellectual and equal cognitive skills.
Consequently
, it may seem unfair to be evaluated equally with others.
For example
,
child
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a child
the child
who is blessed with exceptional skills in arts, music, sports need not to use and compare with
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
child
who joins science Olympics. To deal with
such
problems tutor needs to use very different and simple methods to teach these subjects to children’s, so that they will love to study and implement those teaching in their daily lives whenever necessary. To conclude, mathematics and
philosophy
, these subjects are essential in every
child
’s life at
certain level
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certain levels
a certain level
.
However
, in my opinion, enforcing all students to take these classes at
certain level
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a certain level
will teach them a basic knowledge to deal and survive in
future
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the future
. Given
this
solution, I think
school
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the school
needs to
asses
evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of
assess
and observe every
child
to determine, who is suitable to continue his or her studies in mathematics or
philosophy
.
Submitted by Atmaram Bhide on

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