Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

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Education has been evolving by leaps and bounds and providing children with new avenues while keeping students updated with the relevant skills and mindset. Many children struggle working their

mathematics

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mathematical

problems and try to grasp some philosophical ideas every day.

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, a fair amount of people believe, challenging subjects

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as mathematics and

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should be an optional choice in school. I do not completely agree with

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, as these lessons have its values in shaping one’s life and are so much significant in our daily lives. To embark on, there are multiple reasons why these subjects are taught in school for every

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of all, mathematics helps and trains to think and solve problems logically and

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it is

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used

in other field of studies. Namely, Pythagoras is used in architect to calculate height of a building or it is widely used in core engineering fields.

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philosophy

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teaches students

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the core values

of ethics. An example for

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, during work life, one is required to make business decisions where conscience is involved.

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, these subjects are difficult

to some of students

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for some students

for some of students

, as we know every

child

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is not

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born

with intellectual and equal cognitive skills.

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, it may seem unfair to be evaluated equally with others.

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a child

the child

who is blessed with exceptional skills in arts, music, sports need not to use and compare with

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any of various alternatives; some other

another

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who joins science Olympics. To deal with

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problems tutor needs to use very different and simple methods to teach these subjects to children’s, so that they will love to study and implement those teaching in their daily lives whenever necessary. To conclude, mathematics and

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, these subjects are essential in every

child

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’s life at

certain level

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certain levels

a certain level

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, in my opinion, enforcing all students to take these classes at

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a certain level

will teach them a basic knowledge to deal and survive in

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the future

. Given

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solution, I think

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the school

needs to

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evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of

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and observe every

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to determine, who is suitable to continue his or her studies in mathematics or

philosophy

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