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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

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Annual sport championship like the football World Cup and other tournaments that compete each other nations are gaining popularity worldwide. It can be a good event to show patriotic emotions of the people and proofed as the most attractive occasion to anticipate. I consider myself to fully agree with
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 view.
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, international sporting event is a special one that cannot be seen everyday so that people tend to feel enthusiastic and excited. These feelings usually followed by the spirit of nationality as a shape of support for the country. As an example, Asian Games 2018 which
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have conducted
 in Indonesia created a huge patriotic emotions of the citizens. The event
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 held in every four years can unite every part of the society in Indonesia to gather and becoming a volunteer during the competition in order to succeed it.
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, sport-related events usually have a fair play message so that it can grow
sportivity
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 among all the people. When the athletes spread the value of fair play, the audience will be influenced and follow their attitude.
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, if a football player shows his or her play in a good way, the supporter will feel the
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 vibe as
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well, so
 that the game will end in a safe way and create a peaceful state. As can be summed up, sport-related tournaments can be a place to release patriotic emotions in a good way through fair play message and good attitude of the player who do their activity on the field.
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