Growing number of over-weight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The rising levels of obesity among people, place an enormous burden on the healthcare system. Some people believe that the most effective way to deal with the problem is to incorporate more physical education classes in the curriculum.
This
essay will discuss why physical education is not the solution to the deteriorating health of the public.
Firstly
, sports and exercises for school children do not help the current situation of the over-burdened medical system. The main focus should be to educate the adults. Television can be used as a medium to achieve this
. For example
, different t.v
channels can broadcast yoga and exercises every day in the morning. Yoga channels can be aired for free so that everyone can take advantage of them and stay fit. Celebrities can talk about the benefits of exercising on Suggestion
V
t
.v. These steps will inspire and educate the present generation about the benefits of good health.
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it
Furthermore
, for people to stay fit, regular sports and exercise is a must. The P.E classes conducted in schools will not be sufficient to lose weight and stay that way in the long run. Intermittent sessions on P.E can cause a regain of the weight lost and can lead to loss of confidence among young children. Extra-curricular
activities Suggestion
Extracurricular
such
as dance, zumba
, Suggestion
Zumba
pilates
, martial arts, gym lessons, should be introduced (trademark) a set of exercises used in holistic medicine
Pilates
in addition
to sports, which will keep children energized and active all day.
In conclusion, physical education is not the solution to the current scenario of an increasing number of over-weight people placing a burden on the medical system. Making adults aware of the problems is
the need of the hour. Additional programs Suggestion
are
such
as gym classes, pilates
, yoga and so on should (trademark) a set of exercises used in holistic medicine
Pilates
also
be introduced into the curriculum for children to stay fit and maintain their health.Submitted by Bini Babu on
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