In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food

Approaching health issues in some countries, it’s common to

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something considered choice to eat

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it with excessive junk

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consumed by

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. Some people thought that by increasing

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tax

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taxes

on those foods they would be able to deal with the issue. I disagree that

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is the best way to solve the

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.

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, increasing the

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on fast

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wouldn’t stop

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from consuming it. For those people who afford to buy, they will just consume them as usual with no big deal. But, for those who can’t really afford it, they would just run into other substitutes, which has no difference from consuming fast

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(Instance of consuming canned

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, frozen

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,

etc

continuing in the same way

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). The major health

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will keep

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will be keeping

sticking in the country. Even worse, the cause of the

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can be added by excessive substitute

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eaten by

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.

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exactly not the result hoped

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from

countries dealing with

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kind of situation. Another thing to consider is that the higher

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could be an extra burden for

society

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. They could not freely enjoy the

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as usual. Even for

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, they would need to struggle more, there’s no prosperity among

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. While welfare is everything that

society

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needs and what every country is reaching for.

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, people have their own reasons and situations why they choose to consume fast

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than other consumables. They have the right to consume what they want, it would be unfair for those lower middle class to deal with the changes. In conclusion, increasing

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on fast

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would cause another similar

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to the country and even worse, it could mentally hit the people

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with

the extra burden carried by them and prosperity-

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inadequate in amount or degree

lacking

among people.