You child is going on a school trip overseas for week. The Headmaster is looking for parents to join the trip. Write a letter to state that you would like to join it. In your letter: Mention why you would like to join the trip. Ask some general questions about the trip. Mention how you can be helpful.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I would love to join the trip organized by your school with my son as we both are fond of travelling and exploring new places,
moreover
, by
this
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I could keep an eye on my child as well. Apart from
this
, I would like to ask some queries about
this
journey, whether, there are proper amenities for students like safety, seating arrangements and refreshment facilities.
Furthermore
, the places they will visit will safe or not, Along with
this
, please keep sharing all details and updates with me.
Consequently
, I would like to admire your idea to allow guardians with kids as we can play
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role in
this
trip. To clarify, I
also
could be helpful as being a teacher I could entertain entire kids
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various activities and fun tasks.
As a result
, my presence would be beneficial for your staff . Thanks for
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consideration. Yours sincerely, Bhawna Arya
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural enrichment
  • educational experience
  • personal interest
  • itinerary
  • accommodation
  • roles and responsibilities
  • safety measures
  • emergency procedures
  • medical and disciplinary issues
  • first aid certification
  • language proficiency
  • volunteer experience
  • group management
  • supervision
  • schedule adherence
  • pre-trip preparations
  • post-trip follow-up
  • photo sharing
  • event recap
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