Task 1: The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

Task 1: The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.
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The pie charts compare the proportion of world woodland and log
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five continents.
Overall
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,
while
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Africa
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is the region with the highest percentage of jungle cover, Asia is in the opposite situation.
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, the largest amount of world timber is taken from North
America
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,
while
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Africa
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is by far the smallest lumber producer. In terms of trees,
Africa
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occupies the largest area, 27% of the jungle world, which is almost twice as much as that of Asia. North
America
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comes in
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with their green zone amounting to a quarter of the total forest. Meanwhile, Europe and South
America
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account for only 18% and 16% of
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forest. Regarding
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lumber production, North American countries contain the largest proportion, contributing to 30% of total global timber. Meanwhile, South
America
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and Europe can produce about 23% and 20% of global timber respectively.
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, wood in
Africa
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makes up only 9% of total global production, which is exactly
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half of that in Asia.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words africa, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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