The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

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The pie charts compare the proportion of world woodland and log

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five continents.

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while

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Africa

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is the region with the highest percentage of jungle cover, Asia is in the opposite situation.

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, the largest amount of world timber is taken from North

America

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while

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Africa

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is by far the smallest lumber producer. In terms of trees,

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occupies the largest area, 27% of the jungle world, which is almost twice as much as that of Asia. North

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comes in

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with their green zone amounting to a quarter of the total forest. Meanwhile, Europe and South

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account for only 18% and 16% of

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forest. Regarding

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lumber production, North American countries contain the largest proportion, contributing to 30% of total global timber. Meanwhile, South

America

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and Europe can produce about 23% and 20% of global timber respectively.

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, wood in

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makes up only 9% of total global production, which is exactly

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half of that in Asia.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words africa, america with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

163 words

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The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for a position have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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