People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?

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Nowadays
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in many nations family members
are not giving
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are not given
will not be given
sufficent
of a quantity that can fulfill a need or requirement but without being abundant
sufficient
time
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to
eachother
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each other
.I believe
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happened mainly because people give excess of
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to
internet
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rather than family and
this
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leads to
breakup
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break up
in families. Due to increase in the
usuage
the act of using
usage
usages
of the
internet
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in day
today
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to day
lives
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people are so busy with its online life
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so they often neglected its family.There are various
app
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apps
and social sites constantly keeping them engage are available on the
internet
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like
facebook
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Facebook
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instagram
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watsup
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was up
wats up
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soon
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so on
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Additionaly
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Additionally
, there are
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other tempting things available on the
internet
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like
shoping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
shaping
shipping
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games and gambling
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which force people to
spent
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spend
lot
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lots
of
timeON
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time ON
THIS
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PARTICULAR SITE
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AS a result
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they provide not
sufficent
of a quantity that can fulfill a need or requirement but without being abundant
sufficient
time
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to their families
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There are some clear negative effects of limited
familytimes
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family times
is seen.
Firstly
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from children points of view
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if parents could busy more with the
internet
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they give less
time
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to their children upbringing and
hence
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neglected.It is often said that neglected children have fair chances to chose
wrong path
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the wrong path
a wrong path
quickly and leads to
unappropriate
not suitable for a particular occasion etc
inappropriate
future.
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to
that many
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that, many
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time
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times
due to spending excess
time
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to online
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,
it
creats
make or cause to be or to become
creates
disputes among couples
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which might be the reason
for
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to
fight and eventually results in divorce or
seperation
the state of lacking unity
separation
.Researches
shows
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show
that more than 50 percent of divorce cases are due to online social media happened in many countries.
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, BECAUSE OF LESS
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SHARING BETWEEN FAMILIES CAN CREATE SOME PYSCOLOGICAL PROBLEMS AS WELL
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To sum up
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it is true that people are spending very limited
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with their dear ones and it is mainly due to
interference
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the interference
of the
internet
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in life and result in many nasty outcomes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • predominant
  • commitments
  • imbalance
  • digital technology
  • social media
  • globalization
  • weakened
  • disconnected
  • strain
  • stress
  • mental health issues
  • developmental issues
  • behavioral problems
  • parental guidance
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