Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While a group of people believe that in the contemporary

world humans

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world, humans

are more reliant on each other, others think that we have become freer from dependency. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past. Some people advocate that we have become more dependent on each other in

this

modern era. Globalization might be the

first

reason behind

this

matter.

This

, especially in

workplace

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the workplace

, promotes and increases interactions between different regions and populations around the globe.

Thus

, we as workforce need to excel at team working.

In addition

, because of the hectic and busy lives most families lead, it is argued that they are dependent on others to support them.

For instance

, if the parents want to fulfil their family's expenditure and achieve a better quality of life, they

surly

definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')

surely

sorely

need

support

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the support

of grandparents and babysitters for child care.

On the other hand

, I agree with the others who opine that modernization has made us free and less reliant on our kinds. The

first

reason in

this

growing independence is

technology which

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technology, which

allows us to take

advantages

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advantage

of the modern tools to address our problems without any help.

For example

, thanks to a great popularity of the internet, everybody can easily search for

second

-

hands

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hand

experience in every

aspects

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aspect

of life through the internet.

Moreover

,

this

can be seen in the way that so many people live away from their families and lead their own lives. Nowadays people often reside in different cities or in other countries, seeing each other rarely in some occasions,

therefore

this

makes them more individualistic. In conclusion,

although

many people think that human beings are more dependent these days, others disagree with the statement. I personally state that we are more independent of others in

this

contemporary society