In the last few decades, an increasing number of animal species have become endangered or have died out completely. It appears likely that this situation will continue. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to prevent it?

The significant figure of animal groups

are

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is

at risk of extinction or have totally died out for the

last

ten years, and most likely

this

case will be

continuing

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continued

. In my opinion, it is caused by no proper supervision of wildlife and the solution to prevent it is to organize guards to protect, and have

harsh punishment

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a harsh punishment

for poaching and illegal hunting. The foremost reason for the increasing number of animal extinction is the widespread illegal hunting and no punishment for it. For thousands of years, people are killing animals for fun or trading, and criminals are not sentenced for it. People slaughter animals for fur, oil, and meat and

then

produce it into cosmetics, coats, and traditional medicines in order to fatten their wallets.

As a result

, the overwhelming number of poaching and animals' deaths

keep

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keeps

growing and offenders are not scared of its consequences, because they will not be punished. A possible solution to

this

is to preserve forests and animals by introducing the laws against the illegal hunting and setting up the survey by guards. Imposing harsh punishment and guardian staff along forests could eliminate the hunting,

hence

extinction. Every illegal hunting will entail criminal sanctions and reasonable charges. It will plant fear among poachers and the level of poaching will noticeably decrease. In the West the killing an animal for no proper reason is judged and inflicted by a severe penalty. In conclusion, the main cause of the rising value of endangered species and its evanescence is the absence of strict laws against it, and the effective solution is to utilize the strict investigation over forests and represent suitable rules.