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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument.

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There is an increasing
use
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 devices like tablets, PDA and laptops inside the classroom. As per the
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belief
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belief, this
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technology
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 has
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lots
 of implications in the field of learning.
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, others believe that if suffer from down side associated
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 the usage of modern equipment
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 essay will discuss Merits and demerits of computers in
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. IT is clear that
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the use
 of
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 in
education
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 will create
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better
 impact. Using internet along with
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 can help individuals accessed more information as per their needs.
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, learners have
ability
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the ability
 to learn and research on any topic which they want to learn. And it has been agreed that
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 is very good for
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. Many people disagree and feel that
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 of
technology
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 can reduce real human
interaction
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. Human
interaction
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 helps to exchange knowledge and empathy with each other. Despite of human
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 still possible through
use
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 of Skype, Facebook and Google Hangouts. In conclusion
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 benefits people in learning,
education
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 and corporate sector.
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, it
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 limits the real human
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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