Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists.Do you agree or disagree? Support with examples and reasons from your own experience.

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Some people argue that
entertainment
people
plays
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play
huge role
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a huge role
huge roles
than scientists, but at the same there is a strong counter argument among some sections of people
says
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say
that scientists are
important
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more important
than other
entertainment
people.
How ever I
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However, I
However I
personally subscribed that
this
essay disagree the given
stament
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
because scientists are very
cruicial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
for
country
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the country
and giving comfortable life to mankind.
Firstly
, Scientists are very important to the nation because they work hard and
sacrifises
endure the loss of
sacrifice
their life to their nation development.
For instance
the famous scientist
abdul
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Abdul
kalam
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Kalam
became
space scientist
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a space scientist
and invented
rockekts
any vehicle self-propelled by a rocket engine
rockets
and at the same time he developed electricity from waste material and
this
helped to millions of people
aswell
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as well
as he brought name and fame to
nation
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the nation
with his talent.Where as
entertainement
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
people like movie actors gives
refershment
snacks and drinks served as a light meal
refreshment
to mind with their acting skill.
In addition
to
this
people can survive
with out
in absence of
without
entermainment
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
. In the same way scientists invented many things which helps to lead a human
life
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live
in
comfortable position
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a comfortable position
for example
now all over the facing pandemic situations so, software employee are not able to go out and even not able to work in their offices.
However
,
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,
people are able to do their work from their home by using their computers and even they can all the information through internet.So, because of scientists all human beings are enjoying even in critical situation and
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
need to support and encourage to do more inventions and encourages the students who want become scientists.
However in
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However, in
our
society people
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society, people
always give
important
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importance
to the
entertainment
people.
Therefore
on the basis of all the discussions till now and my personal experiences as well
,
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,
I would like to state in conclusion that scientists are very
cruial
(of persons or their actions) able or disposed to inflict pain or suffering
cruel
people in our society than any other
entertainment
people because of them we can lead our
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
in a comfortable way.
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