Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Thanks to the high technology, more and more artificial intelligences show up in our modern world. While some people worry about the bad impact of these intelligences, I believe there are some benefits to our lives.
Firstly
, artificial
intelligence
is able to create more accuracies for some industries.
For example
, an artificial
intelligence
can assist doctors to finish the operation without making mistakes. Especially when the doctor is feeling
fatigue
Suggestion
fatigued
, the machine can do a better job to help the doctor to complete the surgery. And if there are many old documents need to be reorganized,
computer
Suggestion
the computer
computers
can be a very good helper. It can lessen the organizing time, and manage everything in place.
Secondly
, artificial
intelligence
brings us more conveniences. We used to receive messages from our loved ones for days at a long distance, now we can receive emails in a minute. We can
also
take photos without a professional
first
lens, and see them from our phones immediately.
However
, the development of artificial intelligences can have a bad impact to the job markets.
For example
, if all the cars are replaced to autopilot, fewer and fewer drivers are needed for the public transit. Because the car can drive all by itself. And if robots take charge of the retail stores, like packing products or offering customer service, hundreds of cashers and representatives would lose their jobs. What is more, artificial
intelligence
doesn't have feelings. There are
various of jobs
Suggestion
various jobs
that they
can not
can not
cannot
replace our humans. Like nurses hug newborns at the hospital. Human are able to give interaction and love to the babies. In conclusion, I believe high technology makes us a better place, I
also
believe our human
can not
can not
cannot
be replaced because we have feelings.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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