Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In many places, people think that increasing the legal

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of drivers is the best way to improve

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safety.

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maximization may help to some extent, and I feel that some other measures could be much more effective. The

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reason why the

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extension for drivers is not the best solution is the stringent laws. What do I mean by

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when there are strict laws for everyone, regardless of

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barrier, people might be serious in that case.

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, in many countries, there are speed cameras on different roads, and huge fines imposed on the offenders even could be a suspension of the legal license.

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some might argue that young people are less mature and

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highly likely to break the traffic law, I would counter

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by saying that when the strict rules are there, it is the same for everyone and as long as people are getting

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punished

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time. It is,

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, not surprising to claim that

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barrier alone is not the best way to avoid accidents. Another option could be to increase public transportation availability. When there is

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cheaper

and affordable public

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, people will go for public

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rather than a private vehicle. By doing

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, fewer vehicles will be on the

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and

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a safe

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for all.

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, in many

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already public buses are cheap to afford in the city circle to avoid accidents. If public

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is not available, people prone to go for a private vehicle and more chances for accidents. In conclusion, not only is stricter laws help to increase

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safety but

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public

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make

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makes

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safer for everyone.

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, despite the fact that others feel that

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restriction is the best solution to avoid accidents, I feel that other measures are more important.

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Topic Vocabulary:

minimum legal age
increase road safety
maturity
rash decision-making
cognitive functions
risky behavior
traffic congestion
urban areas
core issues
proper training
adherence to traffic rules
road conditions
vehicle maintenance
stricter driving tests
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