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An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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With the improvement of the
internet
 technology in recent years, an increasing number of people are using it to meet new people and socialise today. Some believed that
this
 has brought people closer. In my opinion,
however
, I think people are becoming more isolated
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 they used to be due to the couple reasons which I will outline in
following essay
Suggestion
the following essay
. Without a doubt, the
internet
 has provided a convenient measure for people to interact and connect to each other.
First
 of all, with the social media,
such
 as FB, IG and Twitter, people can communicate with others anytime and anywhere. It has
broke
Suggestion
broken
 the restriction of country and geography.
Besides
, people can know each other better. Their social media pages show how their life going and what they have done. People can know the details about others without meeting face-to-face.
However
, the
internet
 somehow makes people more isolated and loses social skills. With the convenient method of
communicate
Suggestion
communicating
, people reduce the motivate and times to meet other people face-to-face. They
just typing
Suggestion
are just typing
 anything
happened but
Accept comma addition
happened, but
 seldom talk to the real people. As time
gose
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
goes
 on, they loss the ability of getting along with others in the real world gradually. In conclusion, the
internet
 has provided a new convenient measure for people to interact with others.
Nevertheless
, it
also
 makes us more isolated and loses social skills.
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