More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad.

Presently
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Present
Presence
, abundance of opportunities for continuing higher education abroad make students have allure to study in other countries. Studying abroad has some advantages and disadvantages. At the outset, studying in foreign countries has some benefits.
Firstly
, a plethora of other participants from other nations got students to become familiar with other cultures.
For example
, students could acquire knowledge about not only their traditions and customs, but
also
their festivals and languages lead to more understanding of other nations.
Secondly
, by whom obtaining a higher level degree in other countries new science and technologies have been transformed to the source countries when they come back home. Take Dr.
Hesabi
as a salient example. By returning back to Iran, he started to establish the
first
academic university based on the
last
criteria of a modern definition of the university.
Also
first
radio and television were coined by him and the precise plans of
southern provinces
Suggestion
the southern provinces
of Iran were produced; because, until those years nobody have had knowledge of the
last
groundbreaking methods and tools. These
personal
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persons
personalities
and public attributes are the samples of the benefits of studying in other countries.
However
, there are some drawbacks for pursuing a higher level of study abroad. Being away from family and relatives, students of other countries should tackle with depression and stress. As we know based on plenty of evidence about the role of relationships for people, these students could make social relationships, but cannot compensate lack of family and relatives.
Furthermore
, there is one phenomenon known as 'brain drain' in which more talented young citizens moving abroad with dozens of detrimental effects for their countries. When these groups move their societies confront with shortage of scientists, engineers and doctors.
Moreover
, aged generations should
endeavor
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavour
these responsibilities with less energy and an old obsolete approach, come mostly at a huge cost. In conclusion, there will some merits and demerits for both the individuals and their countries if new generations decide to pursue higher education abroad.
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  • Cross-cultural understanding
  • Specialized courses
  • Personal growth
  • Financial strain
  • Tuition
  • Cultural differences
  • Isolation
  • Homesickness
  • Educational systems
  • Academic performance
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