Being a celebrity – such as a movie star or professional athlete – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or drawbacks?
Fame offers several advantages and disadvantages to a renowned person's
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however
, it takes away their personal Linking Words
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them under constant pressure Change the verb form
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due to
many different reasons. In my Linking Words
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Stardom has more limitations than advantages.Correct article usage
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Thus
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essay will discuss Linking Words
that
why being famous has more drawbacks.
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Firstly
a famous person Linking Words
such
as an actor or actress will gain millions of fans after obtaining popularity. Linking Words
This
is to say that, they feel important and loved by numerous Linking Words
people
, and it will bring happiness and a sense of achievement to their Use synonyms
life
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However
, they can never live a normal Linking Words
life
owing to the Use synonyms
never ending
curiosity of the common Add a hyphen
never-ending
people
about the social and private lives of celebrities. Use synonyms
As a consequence
, they are mostly surrounded by fake friends who are just there to gather information about the Linking Words
life
of a celebrity. Use synonyms
Hence
, the pleasure gained Linking Words
initially
does not Linking Words
last
longer and may become a major cause of stress for them. To exemplify, Shruti Khanna, a popular playback singer in India, took her Linking Words
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in 2002 after the spread of various rumours about her personal Use synonyms
life
.
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popular Add a comma
Similarly,
people
may live an extravagant Use synonyms
life
, as they earn a huge amount of money in their profession. Use synonyms
In other words
, they can own every expensive thing in the world to have a comfortable lifestyle. Linking Words
On the other hand
, they are assumed to be perfect under every circumstance, by their fans. Linking Words
Moreover
, to maintain Linking Words
this
fan following, celebrities are always under pressure to look presentable every time. What is more, they are judged for each and every move they make either in public or in their private Linking Words
life
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they are forced to live a pretentious Linking Words
life
where they cannot express their emotions like others. Use synonyms
In addition
to Linking Words
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, the physical appearance of celebrities has to be perfect too, and for Linking Words
this
several Linking Words
people
undergo surgeries to enhance their beauty. Use synonyms
However
, these surgeries are not always successful
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To conclude
, a celebrity gains various benefits Linking Words
such
as fame and lots of money, Linking Words
although
these are not sufficient for a healthy and happy Linking Words
life
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, their Linking Words
life
is full of stress and burdensome. Use synonyms
Thus
, I believe that being famous is more disadvantageous.Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contributes to the overall argument and that the essay flows logically from one point to the next.
task achievement
Provide a more balanced view by acknowledging some benefits of being a celebrity before focusing on the drawbacks. Additionally, clearly address the prompt by stating your position in the introduction and conclusion.