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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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The world is currently reliant on oil, coal, and natural gas for most of the
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 needs;
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, there will be a time when these become runs out.
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 essay will discuss how we can utilize renewable resources to conserve and prevent non-renewable
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 resources like Fossil fuels from becoming depleted. It will
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 name a few natures forces that can be harnessed to generate
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. Conserving
energy
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 is an essential responsibility of every individual to do their bit for their world. It starts from taking a walk to nearby grocery shop
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 of private cars and utilizing public transport as much as possible when needed. If everyone takes a simple effort similar to
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 when feasible, it will make a more significant difference and real-positive outcome. It is
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 vital that we use
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-efficient vehicles for daily transportation purposes. We would
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 need to initiate a practice to implement a solar-panel based
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 system in every new home is built in the city. The most sustainable alternatives to fossil fuels are renewable
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 resources
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 as sun, wind, ocean powers. The
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 generation using Sun and wind forces is a commonly known approach;
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, more extensive implementation is still required to produce additional
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 resources. The government should
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 be focusing on adding other investments
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 creating more tidal
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-based
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-plants. Recent research in the UK proves that 75 of
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 requirements can be managed with tidal or wave forces in the future. Those options are being untapped today with high potential
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 resources in the future in the absence of fossil fuels. In conclusion, fossil fuels are inevitably draining out, and the earth does not hold the endless reservation of them. With small steps from every person, avoiding personal vehicles as much as possible and utilize public transports will help prevent fossil fuels from running out soon. Awareness and focus around futuristic
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 alternatives
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 as wind, solar and tidal forces are vitally essential to improvise the readiness fast.
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