The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

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I agree with statement in modern
life
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a single career is becoming an old and
everyone
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will be to have several careers or ways of earning money
.
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not only a trend but
also
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condition necessary to live in today's world. To be able to do many jobs, everybody needs
further
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education which will be something that continues throughout
life
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as inevitable. To be in charge of many jobs, people need to learn more. Today, the development of the internet so
everyone
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can learn through courses online. The world has very fast technological advancement. Humans just constantly study can adapt and develop. When you can have enough skills and the ability you want for higher income. In modern
life
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with demand higher in daily spending, if one person
just have
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just has
has just had
a job they will not be able to cover living costs.
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, most young people in social modern
life
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do one or two jobs beside main jobs. In
this
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day
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day, life
life
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, the cost
for
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of
goods and service is increasing, salary is not spending, lead to
everyone
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has trend find extra income. The responsibilities with family and guarantee
life
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better,
everyone
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will get or seek extra jobs or bring to extra income. The development of internet help for
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easier.
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, some staff office
in addition
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to office work they
also
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have
online business
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an online business
or take few typing jobs at home. In conclusion,
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that,
everyone
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cannot exist just with one
jobs
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job
in today
life
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. The trend
have
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has
is having
has had
many jobs as inevitable. And go with humans must always study as a career enhancement and guarantee for you
in
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at
during
work.
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