Dear Mentors, Please evaluate my IELTS ESSAY, Thanks in advance. Nowadays, men’s sport is given far more attention in society than women’s sports. What are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

In recent years, male's sports are becoming increasingly popular, and they are getting far more attention than female's sports. In

this

essay, I will discuss some of the reasons for

this

phenomenon, and I will explain why it is a negative development. There are several reasons why society prefers men's

game

. The most significant reason is that men's games are more entertaining and exciting to watch.

This

is because many experts argue that men are physically stronger than women, and they put more physical efforts on the

game

, which makes the

game

challenging.

Furthermore

, most of the sports matches are watched by male crowd, and they prefer to see matches which feature men. Due to

this

, women's sport does not get enough coverage.

For example

, In

last

year's cricket world cup, male's matches were full of audience.

However

, female's matches had very less audience.

However

, I firmly believe that trend is a negative development.

This

is because women are no different than men.

Nevertheless

, they get very little opportunities in sports to prove their skills.

Moreover

, due to less attention to women's

game

, many talented sportswomen do not get any chance to showcase their talent. To illustrate, In Mumbai, India, as per a report, many sportswomen left sports and chosen some other career because they did not get support from the government and the community. In conclusion, men's sport is more popular because it is more exciting to watch, and it is preferred by the audience.

However

,

this

is a negative trend as it is discriminating and, it

also forcce

Suggestion

also forces

also force

has also forced

is also forcing

also forced

women to change their sports profession.