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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss

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People hold different views about a great time to labour. Some of them claim that to gain a better job employees has to fulfil higher education, whereas others suggest that workers are entitled to have a work even though they are only graduated from school. In the following paragraphs I will examine both standpoints and give my opinion. On the one hand, it is undeniable that employees with a fully completed education
degree
 are demanding the most. In fact, a huge company wishes to have among their workers the persons with accumulated knowledge including the master of his profession.
For instance
, the majority of employers require the university
degree
 as a prove that they can benefit greatly from their gained awareness in a particular sphere. Even if the educated worker does not have any experiences.
On the other hand
, in today's modernized era, it is clear that people even without the university
degree
 can achieve a huge success in labouring.
In addition
, the greater number of employees succeeds in their job only with the gone experiences. To illustrate, most of the world wide famous businessmen accomplished the prosperity with the bitter efforts so currently they are spreading their story that from the nothing they gained a lot. With
this
 in mind, everyone aware them like Bill Gates, yet he did not even finish school. To conclude, from the aforementioned it is obvious that for the great achiever at work is not required to have just the high
degree
.
Subsequently it
Accept comma addition
Subsequently, it
 is more demanding to be experienced labourer.
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