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Inspite of advances made in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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In the world with adequate high tech everything
has be operated
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is operated
has operated
was operated
 via finger tips in
short period
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a short period
 of time regarding every field including horticulture.
Inspite
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In spite
 of
that many
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that, many
 sleep with empty
stomach
 due to lack of resources and poor directorate system. Asia, by far the most popular continent enriches with crop yield where 50% of
population
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the population
is engaged
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are engaged
 in cultivation of food
production putting
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production, putting
 all
there
of them or themselves
their
 efforts and struggling day and night to get a more desirable and improved quality of crops to be distributed
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
.
However
, despite of all
this
hardwork
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hard work
 they don't even get
10th portion
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a 10th portion
 of their struggle. As an example, the majority of farmers are illiterate and being unaware of pros and cons of
trade market
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the trade market
. Buyers make them fool and cheat them by rewarding the cheaper amount of their products, the outcomes
this
 earning will only provide them hardly two times meal in a day. To some extend, hungry
stomach
are
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is
also
 the result of inaccurate and
inopportune administration system
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inopportune administration systems
an inopportune administration system
. Its
responsibility
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the responsibility
 of superintendent of
country
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a country
the country
countries
 to maintain
check
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checks
 and balance and provide starving
stomach
 food and all the essentials at their doorstep.
However
, it can only be fulfilled with proper management from higher authorities to lower authorities. In conclusion, we all are surviving and going through a healthy life because we do have all the necessities needed by the body at our dining table in the shape of foods provided by the farmers.
Likewise
, it's
also
 our duty to check whether they don't sleep with unfilled
stomach
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