Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline is the responsibility of teachers while other think that this is the role of parents. In this essay I will discuss both the viewpoints and share my opinion.

Discipline is important for the all round development of children;
however
, nowadays many students seem to lack it. According to some people parents are responsible for inculcating the value of development in their children; others insist that it is the duty of teachers. I agree with the former view. Different schools have different subjects depending on the child’s age and each subject is taught by a specific lecturer. It is highly unlikely that each lecturer teaches the same standards of control for all pupils across all grades. Each child is different and has to be moulded depending on the child’s behaviour. To illustrate
further
, the school near my house has 40 students in one class. The supervisor often finds it very difficult to control the class and teach the lesson within the allotted space. The lecturer is more concerned about explaining the lesson and completing the course and gives less attention to those who misbehave in their class.
On the contrary
, parents observe their kid very closely since their birth. They tend to spend a lot of points with their children during their free life at home. Since they interact more with their child, they have an opportunity to teach them practice and mend their behaviour. Children often try to imitate their parents and learn behavioural skills from them.
For example
, my son wakes up early in the morning and gets ready for school as we all get ready for our offices.
This
behaviour was not taught by any of us; rather it was something he learned from his own observation. To conclude
this
essay, teachers in
this
modern era find it extremely difficult to restrain all the children and mend their ways within the allotted time. It is the responsibility of the parents to restrain their children and show them what is right and wrong.
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