These days, in many countries fewer and fewer want to became teacher, particularly in secondary school. what are the reason for this, and how could the proble, be solved.

A generation ago, teaching in high school was popular job.
HOWEVER IN
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HOWEVER, IN
some countries
this
is true still and there are a few young people who wants to be a
teacher
in secondary school. In
this
essay I will look at the reason for
this
and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the problem is a
teacher
's salary is lower than many jobs. Our young people see
this
and do not want to be a
teacher
. It is not fair because they
work
almost every day and they get a low level of income. The
second
reason for
this
is the behaviour of pupils.
For example
, the don't do their homework and teachers get angry every day.
Secondly
, if they don't sit quiet, and do not do class
work
, the
teacher
will yell at a student and will be angry during the day. Another reason for
this
problem is that, teachers have a lot of
work
,
for instance
, paper
work
, class
work
and different kind of
work
. While they do their job, they can't do with time in their housework or be with their family. Teachers get angry, and they are everyday in stress,
therefore
their health is not good. And they can be easily ill than other people who works at another job. To sum up, teaching has become less popular, because of salary, students behave, and due to a lot of
work
. In my view if parents will take it seriously
this
problem will be solved.
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