Online education is becoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the recent times many opt for online

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, as It is being popular and welcomed by many youths who do not wish to be present physically at the university. In

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the advantages that outweigh the disadvantages. In the past

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to get admission at the university, as they had a tedious application process, hefty tuition fees, finding accommodation near the campus or in the campus, getting adjusted

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the new environment and student peer. It was stressful for students and the parents involved in

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activities

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. The recent times involving cutting edge technology boom

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the lives of students and parents at ease by enrolling them in online

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where it is less hassle when compared with face to face

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the online tuition fees has become affordable many slashing almost 50% of

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. online tutoring can be recorded and viewed again in order to gain more detailed perspective if any information missed during the lecture and you don’t have to be at the campus but anywhere convenient that fits, having listed all the advantages there are drawbacks which comes along

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there is no physical meeting between classmates or the teaching professor, being present at laboratory experiments or engaging in campus life. To conclude, it is indeed distance

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has been flourishing with

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advantages and could attract many more young people in the upcoming future leading to a new different dimension to the

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industry.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Distance learning
E-learning platforms
Virtual classrooms
Traditional education
Digital resources
Self-paced learning
Asynchronous learning
Blended learning
Technological infrastructure
Student engagement
Time management
Cost-effective
Geographical barriers
Networking opportunities
Face-to-face interaction

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Online education is becoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.

Some people think that the goverment should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource , while others it should not be regulated. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion

The quality of health care a person receives should not depend on the size of their bank balance.The government is responsible for providing a high level of health care for all its citizens.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.