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Online education is becoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the recent times many opt for online
education
, as It is being popular and welcomed by many youths who do not wish to be present physically at the university. In
this
 essay will discuss
on
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about
 the advantages that outweigh the disadvantages. In the past
years students
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years, students
has
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had
have
 to go through several
process
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processes
 to get admission at the university, as they had a tedious application process, hefty tuition fees, finding accommodation near the campus or in the campus, getting adjusted
with
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to
 the new environment and student peer. It was stressful for students and the parents involved in
such
act
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activities
activity
. The recent times involving cutting edge technology boom
has put
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have put
 the lives of students and parents at ease by enrolling them in online
education
 where it is less hassle when compared with face to face
education
,
for example
 the online tuition fees has become affordable many slashing almost 50% of
original fee
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the original fee
. online tutoring can be recorded and viewed again in order to gain more detailed perspective if any information missed during the lecture and you don’t have to be at the campus but anywhere convenient that fits, having listed all the advantages there are drawbacks which comes along
for instance
 there is no physical meeting between classmates or the teaching professor, being present at laboratory experiments or engaging in campus life. To conclude, it is indeed distance
education
 has been flourishing with
such
 advantages and could attract many more young people in the upcoming future leading to a new different dimension to the
education
 industry.
Submitted by JOSEPH PRAVEEN on

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