It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people claim that
authories
writes (books or stories or articles or the like) professionally (for pay)
authors
authorities
others
ought to concentrate on their own residents, and some of them say that if we have some opportunities we should support other countries
also
. In my view, if our city has enough opportunities we should help more people as often as possible. Governments may send some money to poor city. In these days,
government
Suggestion
the government
has own issues as
environment
Suggestion
environmental
problems, healthcare, low education,
unemploymeent
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
.
Authories
Suggestion
Authorities
should encourage their enjoyment.
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