It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, some people claim that

authories

writes (books or stories or articles or the like) professionally (for pay)

authors

authorities

others

ought to concentrate on their own residents, and some of them say that if we have some opportunities we should support other countries

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. In my view, if our city has enough opportunities we should help more people as often as possible. Governments may send some money to poor city. In these days,

government

Suggestion

the government

has own issues as

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environmental

problems, healthcare, low education,

unemploymeent

the state of being unemployed or not having a job

unemployment

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Authorities

should encourage their enjoyment.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

75 words

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