An increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?
Over the recents years the number of students going to study overseas has become massive, due to the benefits of studying abroad.
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essay will contain my opion
about the theme as well as the advantages as a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
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disavantages
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disadvantages
first
one it´s the develepoment
of the students themselves when they contact with new people and other cultures. While they stay out of their act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
confort
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personality
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at making new things that they haven´t done before things like cooking cleaning and treat them for freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
themselfs
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career
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ideas
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ideas
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disavantages
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disadvantages
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