International community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g gas and oil. Do you agree or disagree?

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Projects which unite nations up to discuss international problems should direct their efforts to deal with

overusing energetic resousrec

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the overusing energetic resource

overusing energetic resource

overusing energetic resources

. I totally agree with

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and explain my view in

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essay in details.

To begin

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with, energetic values of all countries are used in the majority amounts by citizens during the whole year.

As a result

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, it leads to depletion.But these

recources

available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

resources

are one of the main constituent in each

personsl

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person's

persons

life.

For example

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, their autos expending a lot of fuel during the day and

consequently

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forces to spend much money to recharge it's stock.From

this

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, governments get big profit thanks to their own citizens and can redirect these sums to enhance their

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

reduct

made less in size or amount or degree

reduced

supply of

mashines

any mechanical or electrical device that transmits or modifies energy to perform or assist in the performance of human tasks

machines

using modern

tecnhilogies

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technologies

In other words

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goverment

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the government

government

governments

can simply fix

this

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situation without big efforts.

On the other hand

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, many countries have almost perpetual spare of gas

Accept space

oil and fuel and their prices are quite

acceptabel

worthy of acceptance or satisfactory

acceptable

for day-to-day routines of people.For

inctance

an occurrence of something

instance

instances

instanced

, in my

countrie

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

county

cost of

such

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needs don't reach trouble for citizens or

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

purveyances.

However

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, many country leaders are gathering together in

specal

unique or specific to a person or thing or category

special

comunities

a group of people living in a particular local area

communities

comments

commodities

such

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the UN

to undertake

measure

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measures

to deal with problems.It proves

this

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fact that our daily used needs deliver problems to the

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

government's

purveyances. To sum up, it is clear that it is essential for governments to act as right as possible they think because they aware of their position better than inhabitants In conclusion,

despeite

regardless of, in defiance of

despite

it seems to us that we use our

energetic

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energy

sources in measure,

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

have more information about these resources and should be able to take

situatuon

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a situation

situation

the situation

situations

station

under their control, so

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fully agree with

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Supported main points

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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