Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen

Dear Mr Smith, I am your nearby resident and writing
this
letter to inform you
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inconvenience caused by your dog. I am a university student and my exams are scheduled for
next
month for which I have to study long hours including late
night
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at night
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. During
daytime
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, I attend university for a few hours and later in the evening, I take a rest. Unfortunately, due to
barking
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sound of the dog, I am not able to concentrate
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my studies.
Moreover
, my family members’ sleep
also
getting affected due to the disturbance and
this
impact our
next
day. Can you please find out what is the issue with him as he barks continuously sometimes? It might be possible that he is not well and suffering from some pain. If possible, you can get him examined through a Veterinarian. Kindly let me know if I can help you in
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way. Kindly pay attention to
this
issue. I am looking forward to your reply. Regards, Barry Richardson
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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