Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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in virtual
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, it is very
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how far the law or social acceptance should be allowed about
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of acceptance, and weight
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than
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the internet which is provided for free compared to creative work which seems
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but charged. Meanwhile, a
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property
however
people
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exertion. In
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we can easily find out the copy of books which contain
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however
unfortunately logical sanctions do not properly protect what
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awareness comes up with free but illegally distributed works.
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strong legislation and systems that any works related to
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, Still in
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unfortunately by logical sanction, law and even
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of
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secretly
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files which contain
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are prevalent. Even though
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sort of creative work is approachable,
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commit
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should be eliminated.
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  • firstly
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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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