Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An
advertisement
is
Suggestion
Is
not only about appearance of
product's
Suggestion
the product's
a product's
visual but
alsoabout
Suggestion
also about
how to move people's preference to use our
product
. There is a view recently, that the good sale number of famous products reflects the power of advertising and the real needs of the community is not a priority anymore. In my opinion, I completely disagree with
this
point of view.
First
of all, it is a common knowledge that in economic principle, production number follows the quantity of demand. If we try to understand
this
statement in detail, it is not only about the power of
advertisement
, but
also
the needed amount of the
product
itself as a main reason why the purchasing
value
is higher.
For instance
, an indie brand or local brand could sell a certain number of the consumer goods without a ton of advertising in mass media or using a
pricey
Suggestion
pricing
model. It proofed that a main factor of selling a commodity is not about advertising only.
Secondly
, nowadays the main reason people buy things do not depend on the needed, but relate to the
value
of the
product
. Producers are more creative recently by adding additional
value
to the craft they made so that consumers want to pay for it. In the example, I invest my money to get clothes from a marginal local brand because by buying them I contribute to help a local tailor. In
this
case, I buy that thing because of
its
the thing named or in question
it
value
Suggestion
Value
and
Suggestion
And
it does not relate to the
advertisement
. In conclusion, a high sale is not only reflecting about the power of
advertisement
, but
also
there are some other influencing factors.
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