In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they know only a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
Small
villages
life is very Suggestion
village
village's
straightforword
.People staying in crossroads are more friendly and extrovert. There is always free from ambiguity
straightforward
sense
of homely feeling in small cities.
Suggestion
a sense
the sense
good thing
about living is small community isSuggestion
The good thing
Good thing
,
people will always there for your help.Because these people consider Accept space
,
there
neighbours as their own familyof them or themselves
their
.
Accept space
.
people
living in small cities are not keen Suggestion
People
of
staying aloneSuggestion
on
,
while in Accept space
,
cities
mostly everyone is Suggestion
the cities
concern
about their privacySuggestion
concerned
.
City people Accept space
.
dont
have much do not
don't
time
for Use synonyms
there
own family and of them or themselves
their
children which
makes gaps in relationships, Accept comma addition
children, which
as a result
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Linking Words
this
children starts seeking attention plural of "this"
these
somwhere
else in or at or to some place
somewhere
consequently
they end up having bad company.While in villages people are not much Linking Words
stresses
with work which gives lots of Suggestion
stress
time
for Use synonyms
famliy
a social unit living together
family
.
They cherish each other company apart from family Accept space
.
too and
always ready to help in their hard timesAccept comma addition
too, and
.
Accept space
.
Futhuremore people
in villages as in the villageAccept comma addition
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Furthermore people
,
families are staying in very small land. Accept space
,
there
will be daily interaction anyhowSuggestion
There
,
so it is likely to have Accept space
,
inetraction
between them.
a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting
interaction
interactions
Howerever it
is Accept comma addition
However, it
However it
challening
to survive in small citiesrequiring full use of your abilities or resources
challenging
.
Accept space
.
beacuse
of scarcity of resources which is easily available in large citiesSuggestion
Because
Beacuse
.
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.
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example in
Accept comma addition
example, in
villages
there is Suggestion
the villages
lack
of source of Suggestion
a lack
income unlike
large cities which have Accept comma addition
income, unlike
abundance
of industries. There are lots of activities available in cities due to which people Suggestion
an abundance
dont
have much do not
don't
time
of one Use synonyms
anothere
any of various alternatives; some other
another
for example
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,
Accept space
,
pepole
spend most of their (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
time
in officesUse synonyms
,
in Accept space
,
gym
and Suggestion
the gym
surffing
internet. They the sport of riding a surfboard toward the shore on the crest of a wave
surfing
dont
need much of friends to spend do not
don't
time
Use synonyms
.
Accept space
.
in
Suggestion
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fact most
of young generation living in cities Accept comma addition
fact, most
like
to pass Suggestion
likes
time
aloneUse synonyms
.
To conclude people in small cities are living more Accept space
.
stressfree
and relaxed life than city peopleSuggestion
stress free
.
Giving Accept space
.
time
to their friends and having people around you is always better than staying isolated in abundance of Use synonyms
facilites
.a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
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