In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they know only a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

Small
villages
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village
village's
life is very
straightforword
free from ambiguity
straightforward
.People staying in crossroads are more friendly and extrovert. There is always
sense
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a sense
the sense
of homely feeling in small cities.
good thing
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The good thing
Good thing
about living is small community is
,
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,
people will always there for your help.Because these people consider
there
of them or themselves
their
neighbours as their own family
.
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.
people
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People
living in small cities are not keen
of
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on
staying alone
,
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,
while in
cities
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the cities
mostly everyone is
concern
Suggestion
concerned
about their privacy
.
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.
City people
dont
do not
don't
have much
time
for
there
of them or themselves
their
own family and
children which
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children, which
makes gaps in relationships,
as a result
of
this
plural of "this"
these
children starts seeking attention
somwhere
in or at or to some place
somewhere
else
consequently
they end up having bad company.While in villages people are not much
stresses
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stress
with work which gives lots of
time
for
famliy
a social unit living together
family
.
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.
They cherish each other company apart from family
too and
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too, and
always ready to help in their hard times
.
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.
Futhuremore people
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Furthermore, people
Furthermore people
in villages as in the village
,
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,
families are staying in very small land.
there
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There
will be daily interaction anyhow
,
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,
so it is likely to have
inetraction
a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting
interaction
interactions
between them.
Howerever it
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However, it
However it
is
challening
requiring full use of your abilities or resources
challenging
to survive in small cities
.
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.
beacuse
Suggestion
Because
Beacuse
of scarcity of resources which is easily available in large cities
.
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.
For
example in
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example, in
villages
Suggestion
the villages
there is
lack
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a lack
of source of
income unlike
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income, unlike
large cities which have
abundance
Suggestion
an abundance
of industries. There are lots of activities available in cities due to which people
dont
do not
don't
have much
time
of one
anothere
any of various alternatives; some other
another
for example
,
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,
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
spend most of their
time
in offices
,
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,
in
gym
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the gym
and
surffing
the sport of riding a surfboard toward the shore on the crest of a wave
surfing
internet. They
dont
do not
don't
need much of friends to spend
time
.
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.
in
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In
fact most
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fact, most
of young generation living in cities
like
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likes
to pass
time
alone
.
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.
To conclude people in small cities are living more
stressfree
Suggestion
stress free
and relaxed life than city people
.
Accept space
.
Giving
time
to their friends and having people around you is always better than staying isolated in abundance of
facilites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sense of community
  • Bond
  • Close-knit
  • Tight-knit
  • Belonging
  • Familiarity
  • Security
  • Support system
  • Social connections
  • Look out for
  • Have someone's back
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