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Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and your opinion.

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These days, a huge number of people believe that their
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 should
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 international sporting events.
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, others say that these events invite more problems than benefits. I, personally, believe that
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 countries should measure all possible odds before planning to
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 an event at the international level.
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 with, financial is a key concern to
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 an international sporting event as it takes billions of dollars to build the arenas and infrastructure.
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, many people argue that these funds must be spent on education programs or other social programs that provide direct support to the society.
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, according to recent research, which reveals, the government of India took the debt of over 1 billion rupees to
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 the Cricket World Cup 2019,
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, they reduced budget for other social programs which affected the society.
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, these international events bring lots of benefits as well.
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 and foremost, it brings honour and prestige to the local community of the
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.
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, tourism in the
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 will increase sharply as it plays an integral part to boost the economy.
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, people will travel from the world to witness a sporting event.
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, people will visit other attractions as well and spend money on shopping, restaurants, hotels, and other activities.
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, tourism will help that
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 to boost the economy dramatically.
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, it allows the
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 to make its culture better known in the world. In conclusion and to offer my opinion, organizing sports events at the international level is not an easy task. The government should consider all the odds before planning any events in their
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 as it could affect the local community.

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