Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy in life? What other things in life can make people happy? Happiness is crucial to live good and prosperous?

Happiness is significantly important to live a good and prosperous
life
. It is often argued by some people that being Wealthy is the a major source of happiness in a
life
. In my view, I think that the money for sure bring some joys to some extent in an individual's
life
by allowing them to purchase their materialistic things, but, there are other factors
such
as good family, satisfaction in the profession, healthy
life
many more that contributes to
this
as well. In
this
essay I will shed some light on how Wealth makes people happy and what other factors plays role to ensure happiness in the lives of people.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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