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Around the world children learn English language as a second language at school. however, in some places they also learn at Kinder garden. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning at kinder garden?

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Having a multi-
language
 skills works as a boon especially English. In most of the nations learning English
language
 comes in
second
 position in the educational institutions. While, in some countries, kids do not wait for schools they can start learning from their kinder garden.
This
 treatise will shed light on both merit and demerits of
this
 situation in subsequent subsections.
To begin
 with, there are numerous benefits learning
this
language
 at starting age.
First
 of all, infants can catch easily normal routine words and try to use those words on a daily basis,
hence
 they do not need to cram anything,
also
 they know about the exact meaning and proper usage of words.
Secondly
, because they understand the core concept of the English
language
 from their initial ages,
then
 their mind properly develops with
this
language
.
As a result
, they do not need to relay to others if they want to learn
this
language
 in future.
For example
, my daughter, she came a
Canada
Suggestion
Canadian
 couple of months before, and fortunately, I feel lucky she learned English from their provincial
country
,
hence
 she is behaving in good manners as well as she is able to communicate with other Canadian kids.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks which can make detrimental effects in the community. As every
country
 renowned by their own specific
language
, if schools don't take them seriously, and giving preference to the English from kinder garden,
then
 kids definitely do not take interest towards
nation
language
.
Moreover
, children may not get the values of their original
language
 of homey
country
.
As a result
, it can become a vital issue for the
country
.
Secondly
, after applying the English subject at most priority can result, as lack of
first
language
 users in the
nation
. In the conclusion, I personally believe that learning any
language
 depends on the
nation
 to
nation
 as every
country
 does not have the English as a
first
language
.
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