You are studying at a university in New Zealand. Your passport was stolen three days ago. Write a letter to you embassy, giving details of what happened and asking what you should do next.

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Dear

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/ mam I am Gurbakhshish Singh.

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I am from India and currently studying

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the

university

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University

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of New

Zeland

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Zealand

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. I want to inform the embassy that my passport has been stolen three days ago.

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week on Friday I was going for my job interview and

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carried all my documents include with

the

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pasport

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passport

and after my interview I travelled

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the bus and after reaching home when

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checked my document folder

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it was missing. I think someone

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the bus stole my file because there was some money with the documents. Now I want to know

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apply

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what should be the next step for me to get the new passport. Because in

the

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foreign nation passport is the first identity of

person

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the person

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. I will be very

thankfull

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thankful

to you if you guide me with

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the next

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procedures.

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faithfully Gurbakhshish Singh 2 Jan 2025

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language accuracy

Consider checking and correcting minor spelling errors, such as 'Zeland' instead of 'Zealand', to improve accuracy.

organisation

Ensure the paragraphs are clearly divided based on individual ideas, such as separating what happened from what steps are needed.

task achievement

You included all the necessary information about the incident and the help you need from the embassy.

writing tone

The tone of the letter is appropriate for formally addressing an embassy, showing respect and clarity in your request.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

theft
stolen
embassy
contacted
local police
case number
replacement passport
procedures
emergency assistance
temporary identification
emergency travel documents

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