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Writing Samples
Band 6

You are studying at a university in New Zealand. Your passport was stolen three days ago. Write a letter to you embassy, giving details of what happened and asking what you should do next.

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Dear
sir
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Sir
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 / mam I am Gurbakhshish Singh.
Basically
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 I am from India and currently studying
in
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at
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 the
university
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University
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 of New
Zeland
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Zealand
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. I want to inform the embassy that my passport has been stolen three days ago.
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 week on Friday I was going for my job interview and
i
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I
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 carried all my documents include with
the
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my
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pasport
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passport
 and after my interview I travelled
in
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on
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 the bus and after reaching home when
i
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I
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 checked my document folder
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 it was missing. I think someone
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 the bus stole my file because there was some money with the documents. Now I want to know
that
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apply
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what should be the next step for me to get the new passport. Because in
the
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 foreign nation passport is the first identity of
person
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the person
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. I will be very
thankfull
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thankful
 to you if you guide me with
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the next
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 procedures.
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 faithfully Gurbakhshish Singh 2 Jan 2025

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language accuracy
Consider checking and correcting minor spelling errors, such as 'Zeland' instead of 'Zealand', to improve accuracy.
organisation
Ensure the paragraphs are clearly divided based on individual ideas, such as separating what happened from what steps are needed.
task achievement
You included all the necessary information about the incident and the help you need from the embassy.
writing tone
The tone of the letter is appropriate for formally addressing an embassy, showing respect and clarity in your request.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • theft
  • stolen
  • embassy
  • contacted
  • local police
  • case number
  • replacement passport
  • procedures
  • emergency assistance
  • temporary identification
  • emergency travel documents
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