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Writing Samples
Band 6

Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter describe what you like about the library say what you don't like make suggestions for improvements

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Dear Mr. Antony, Hi, I just saw the announcement that they want to make modifications and I would like to give my opinion. I have been spending a lot of time in your
library
Use synonyms
. Good times and good books,
as well as
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 a great combination of friends, entertainment and reading,
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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 what many think of their
library
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 experiences. Lots of people love the
library
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, I certainly do and they are always ready to have a story to tell about how great the
library
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 is or was for them.
For
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On
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another
Correct determiner usage
the
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hand
Correct word choice
other hand
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, sometimes people
doesn´t
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don´t
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 go because there are
kind
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kinds
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 of problems
about
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with
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rules
Correct article usage
the rules
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.
For example
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, phone ringing, loud conversations, you can smell of
foods
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food
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 of someone
then
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 If you are in a row in the central area, every few minutes someone will come and go, I could name many things but I don´t want to extend it too much. I would like to make some suggestions to improve some things. Put
sings
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signs
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 with rules [don´t eat, don´t make noise], better organize circulation for walking and make it open 24 hours a day. I look forward to hearing from you David

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Coherence & Cohesion
Try to clarify and separate different points into distinct paragraphs for clarity.
Grammar
Ensure consistent subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'people doesn’t go' should be 'people don’t go'.
Task Achievement
Elaborate on each point with specific examples to strengthen your suggestions.
Greeting & Closing Style
The letter has clear and courteous greetings and conclusions, establishing good tone.
Task Response
The letter addresses both positive and negative aspects of the library, meeting the task requirements.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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