Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter describe what you like about the library say what you don't like make suggestions for improvements
Dear Mr. Antony,
Hi, I just saw the announcement that they want to make modifications and I would like to give my opinion.
I have been spending a lot of time in your
library
. Good times and good books, Use synonyms
as well as
a great combination of friends, entertainment and reading, Linking Words
is
what many think of their Correct subject-verb agreement
are
library
experiences.
Lots of people love the Use synonyms
library
, I certainly do and they are always ready to have a story to tell about how great the Use synonyms
library
is or was for them.
Use synonyms
For
Change preposition
On
another
Correct determiner usage
the
hand
, sometimes people Correct word choice
other hand
doesn´t
go because there are Change the verb form
don´t
kind
of problems Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
about
Change preposition
with
rules
. Correct article usage
the rules
For example
, phone ringing, loud conversations, you can smell of Linking Words
foods
of someone Fix the agreement mistake
food
then
If you are in a row in the central area, every few minutes someone will come and go, I could name many things but I don´t want to extend it too much.
I would like to make some suggestions to improve some things. Put Linking Words
sings
with rules [don´t eat, don´t make noise], better organize circulation for walking and make it open 24 hours a day.
I look forward to hearing from you
DavidCorrect your spelling
signs
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Coherence & Cohesion
Try to clarify and separate different points into distinct paragraphs for clarity.
Grammar
Ensure consistent subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'people doesn’t go' should be 'people don’t go'.
Task Achievement
Elaborate on each point with specific examples to strengthen your suggestions.
Greeting & Closing Style
The letter has clear and courteous greetings and conclusions, establishing good tone.
Task Response
The letter addresses both positive and negative aspects of the library, meeting the task requirements.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,