The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter > Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly >explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours >suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regards to the issue of trash collection in the Bommanahalli area. I am a resident here, facing

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problem over the past month and need your intervention to solve

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immediately. In our locality, garbage

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used to come regularly on Wednesday and Saturday.

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, in the

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there were many irregularities and noticed that the person who picks up has changed. He is reluctant to answer and found to have

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with others for questioning.

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is impacting the entire community. Lately, there has been a rise in

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mosquitoes and 10 people are suffering from different kinds of

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like viral fever, dengue and malaria.

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might worsen the situation if things continue. We need your help in addressing

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chaos either by replacing the person or ensuring he is regular on his duty. As long as the garbage collection is regular we do not have any kind of troubles in

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region and request to expedite

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at the earliest. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Sumanth

Depuri

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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